The Greatest Sin – Vol 1: The Fallen by Lee French and Eric Kort – Tangled Sky Press (2014)

fallen-leefrenchThe Fallen is the first book in the Greatest Sin series. Volume 1 introduces us to Chavali the Seer, a gypsy fortuneteller who can read minds. It also introduces us to the Fallen, an organization of resurrected people who are seeking to discover the nature of the Greatest Sin and reunite their world with its goddess Creator.

It’s difficult to write a review for a book like this without giving away spoilers, so I’ll keep it brief. The Fallen manages to draw you in from the beginning. Chavali’s world and culture are richly drawn. Chavali’s emotional range and reactions to the events around her flow naturally. While Chavali is well-developed, some of the other characters were flat and interchangeable. Some are very interesting. I’m particularly keen to know what’s going on with the horse! But the antagonist isn’t well developed and this affected my level of investment in the third act of the book.

The plot was a little muddled. There were certainly three acts, but it didn’t flow very well. The end of the book felt anticlimactic, but I realize this is the first book in a series. It was a good read. I wouldn’t mind reading the next one.  I rate this book 4 out of 5 stars.

-Tony Breeden
From the Bookwyrm’s Lair

Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from the author for review. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 <> : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”


About Tony Breeden

Tony Breeden is an author, creation speaker, Gospel preacher, vocalist and artist from West Virginia. He is also the founder of Find out about his books at

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